Feedback on "Why Transfer" essay

[oblakutvojojkafi]

<p>Sure. I'll read it. PM me.</p>

[jackfitz]

<p>ill rip it apart and put it back together pm me</p>

[madamebovary]

<p>sure ill read it if you still need editing; pm me</p>

[mfd3q]

<p>I'll read that janx</p>

[dufflebagjesus]

<p>pm it to me and ill give you some comments</p>