<p>If anyone could critique these for me, that'd be great.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to review them for you. PM it to me, and I’ll get back to you with any criticisms or suggestions.</p>
<p>pm to me and I will dude</p>
<p>PM me, no prob.</p>
<p>you can email me for my comments.</p>
<p>pm me no prob</p>
<p>sure…pm it!</p>
<p>pm me. 10char</p>
<p>I don’t know if this essay is for transfer, but I went through the transfer admissions process last year and could be of help.</p>
<p>id love to :)</p>