<p>I'm posting this in the transfer forum because I'm hoping to get feedback from people who are experienced with this process. </p>
<p>I'm feeling a little like my essay is too out there and want some feedback on how it works as a whole, and also what kind of impression you get of me when you read it. </p>
<p>Thanks in advance! If you respond, I will PM you the essay.</p>
<p>I already applied to the UC schools, so I’ve written my essays already. You can PM them to me. I’m pretty harsh with my critiques though, so it’s your choice.</p>
<p>I’ve finished mine too~ you can email me if you want~</p>
<p><a href=“mailto:zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu”>zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu</a></p>
<p>Successfully admitted to Dartmouth, Penn, NYU, and Cornell in 2008. Happy to read.</p>
<p><a href=“mailto:jrapp@sas.upenn.edu”>jrapp@sas.upenn.edu</a></p>
<p>happy to read it!</p>
<p>Me too! send it over</p>
<p>I hope I can help!</p>
<p>i hope i can help too!</p>
<p>happy to read!</p>
<p>Thanks everybody! I’ll get on it asap! =]</p>