Feedback on "Why Transfer" essay

Transfer Students
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<p>Can anyone read over my statement/short essay? I want to make sure I write it correctly- ie, not being overly critical/nit picky about my current school.
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks :)!</p>

2

<p>I'll give you some feedback if you'd like.</p>

3

<p>PM it to me and i'll a look at it :)</p>

4

<p>I'll proof it for you if you'd like.</p>

5

<p>PM me as well if you'd like.</p>

6

<p>pm me, I'd love to read it. I'll post mine here later</p>

7

<p>I would love to read as well!</p>

8

<p>Sure, PM me.</p>

9

<p>I'll read it if you choose to PM...I am having a problem with the length of my own essay. It is currently 52 pages.</p>

10

<p>I wouldn't mind giving it a read. I too will have to be writing a transfer essay soon. Just PM it to me, and I'd be glad to give some feedback!</p>

11

<p>I will read it too if you want . I'm taking courses at NYU.</p>

12

<p>Fire away....</p>

13

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

14

<p>ill take a look</p>

15

<p>Yeah send it in. i'll give it a thorough read</p>

16

<p>i'll read it and give you some constructive feedback.</p>

17

<p>i'd love to help you out. can you PM me please?</p>

18

<p>PM me, and I will send you feedback.</p>

19

<p>I'd like to read it if you don't mind.</p>

20

<p>I'd also like to read it if you don't mind.</p>