Final version of CA essay

Would anyone be willing to read my final version and give me feedback?

I’m applyibg to Harvard and Stanford (among others). Looking for people out of high school only.

I really need help deciding whether my essay is too cliché, so that I can scrap it and start a new one as soon as possible. I have written several drafts of this and I’ve been working on it little by little since September.

So if it really is awful and cliché, I want to know as soon as possible so I have enough time to write something else!

Sure, I can help, just pm me.

@Fishnlines29 ok thanks!

PM me too if you want.

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