<p>I need someone (or a couple people) to read through my draft and just tear it apart. Anyone willing? :)</p>
<p>I would be happy to take a look and provide feedback. I have a B.A. from Stanford and a J.D. from Harvard (and can verify for you). Please feel free to PM me - to get started, I will need the prompt and a Word version of your essay.
JP</p>
<p>Sure, PM me</p>