<p>I need harsh critiquing and help with making improvements in both writing style and content</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>Would you like to exchange essays? Because I just finished that one too, and it needs a lot of work. Hahahah 
I’m totally fine if you don’t feel comfortable having a 2014-er read your essay, but trust me, I’m not diligent enough to overhaul mine to steal your ideas.</p>
<p>already in college. a bit bored during christmas break and willing to glimpse, ha. send it over if you trust</p>
<p>I’ll exchange with you CanaryK.</p>
<p>sent</p>
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<p>i dont mind reading it. Im not applying there so no worries =)</p>
<p>lol I need something interesting to read right now.
Send it, my friend. I’ll try my best with your work. :)</p>
<p>i’ll critique it, already submitted mine. i hated that one lol</p>
<p>I’ll give you a critique. send it over!</p>