finished roommate essay but does it communicate enough about me?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Stanford University
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<p>Hi all. I've finished my stanford roommate essay but I'm not sure if it says enough about me. It's also kind of weird/embarrassing lol. Any readers willing to help? thanks!</p>

<p>Brian</p>

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<p>I’d like to read it and give you feedback! But I shall be brutal!</p>

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<p>please do! it needs all the ripping apart it can get. make it bleed!</p>

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<p>hey, I’ll give it a read.</p>

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<p>PM it over, I’ll critique it.</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to give some feedback~</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too. PM it over.</p>