French HELP!!!

<p>So I wrote this skit for french, it is bascailly talking about a white boy getting robbed in the hood over some new cloth, it is suppose to be funny...here it is I think I made quite a few errors in there, so please correct me....</p>

<p>thanks a lot </p>

<p>French Skit</p>

<p>Pendant un jour dans le ghetto, Graham marchait en arri</p>

<p>French is tres gay. I would help if I had more than simply french 1.</p>

<p>what french level are you in?</p>

<p>2</p>

<p>I had help writing this but I just want to know if this make any sense at all.</p>

<p>Je le d</p>

<p>oolala, elle a du chien.</p>

<p>le poisson a fraud.</p>

<p>il est mon petit ami.</p>

<p>^do these make sense? i had a few french lessons.</p>

<p>no they dont! lol. I skimmed the page. They are wrong, I wont tell you how to correct them, thats up to you. :)</p>

<p>W: qu'il a achet</p>

<p>It looks like the OP used Babelfish French. Don't know, maybe it's just me. I don't take French, so I can't be sure.</p>

<p>op,
I don't know about your school, but at my school asking upper level students,higher level speakers or posting on the internet for help is plagarism/cheating in the area of foreign languages.</p>

<p>so I agree with guidez89, there are mistakes (many mistakes) but you shoul dbe fixing them yourself</p>

<p>actually, we are encouraged to edit papers with partners from time to time in spanish, so I wouldn't worry</p>