FSU essay

I am about to start my essay for FSU.
We firmly believe that every person is unique and of value. Our University is enriched by embracing individual differences and creating a community that is much more than the sum of its parts. In 650 words or less, share your story with us. Tell us how you came to be the person you are today, and about your passions and future expectations. Describe how you will benefit from our community and how our community will benefit from you.

Im not really sure what to talk about. I want to talk about my life and stuff but I do not want it to sound like a take pitty in me story. What should I do?

Im in the same situation as you. Im trying to write but dont know what to write about

I am about 75% done with my essay. I talked about how my families situation made me who I am today and my goals in life. I still need to talk about how their campus will benefit me and how they will benefit from me.

Take a moment of your life and describe it neatly. The best essays are about nothing in particular.

Like a narrative.

Would you like to read it

With any college essay, the whole point is to stand out. You dont want to talk about a story or construct the essay that literally anyone else can and will do. Think outside the box, dont look at the prompt conventionally, really think in depth about your response.

Could I send u mine to read?

feel free to send me yours :slight_smile:

Ok