<p>I'm working on my "Why U Penn essay". A couple of people have read it (including Penn alumni) and they said that it is pretty good- clear, good content. However, I'm still not satisfied with the essay; I've talked about the reasons but it seems too straightforward and not very meaningful. I would really like to improve the essay; any tips on how I might do this? Thanks so much</p>
<p>Sure, I'll do help. Run a PM by me if you so wish.</p>
<p>ill help too. you can pm me.</p>
<p>I will help.But to start try to remember all the specific things you liked: Sights smells, people, the feelings you had when you were there. Why you liked the things you liked. Be specific. Be Honest.Lay down on your bed and visualize your trip there. What did you have to eat? Who did you talk to? These are the things that will make your essay real. Good luck!</p>
<p>yea ill help for sure give some pointers</p>
<p>I'll give you some advice.</p>
<p>Private Message me the essay.</p>
<p>ill be glad to help. pm me</p>
<p>id love to help, just pm me the essay</p>
<p>i'll read yours, maybe you can read mine too?</p>