<p>In the beginning of eighth grade I weighed about 220 pounds and I stood at 5'10. (That's in fat lol) So if I talked about my journey to losing 80 pounds over two years and explain how drastically my life's been changed, do you think that's something that admissions officers would be like "Wow, this is a great topic!"? I run a lot too - not for any organization or team though so I'm not listing it in my app.</p>
<p>Good topic. Tell more about the journey than the “my life is so different,” though.</p>
<p>It sounds like a good topic, but make sure it doesnt make you look narcissistic or vain.</p>
<p>Looks good. Just focus on a couple of important scenes and illustrate them for the reader.</p>