<p>I was wondering if anyone wanted to read my college essays (Common App, Optional, and Why Penn?) and basically "grade" them. What I mean is, I already submitted the application, but I'd like to know just what you thought. Basically, I want a more accurate chance after you read my essays. </p>
<p>My chance thread is the followinghttp://talk.collegeconfidential.com/university-pennsylvania/1256021-chance-me-wharton.html%5B/url%5D">http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/university-pennsylvania/1256021-chance-me-wharton.html</a></p >
<p>I'd also appreciate if you could let me know who you are, i.e. current student, parent of a student, someone accepted early, etc.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
corvyie
December 31, 2011, 5:43pm
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<p>I can help. My friend was accepted early to Wharton and we’re both on internships in ETH Zurich right now. You can PM it to me.</p>
<p>^ Just read whatever you want, and give a general comment. Not looking for detailed editing :)</p>
<p>sure just pm it to me. I am a parent of a son who was accepted last year ED, but have read many Penn essays - good and bad.</p>
<p>Gary</p>
<p>Sure I can try helping. I am currently a freshmen in college who will apply to Wharton as a transfer student.</p>
Rush10
December 31, 2011, 9:53pm
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<p>Feel free to send it my way.</p>
<p>I can help. Family friend’s daughter went to Wharton, graduated with JWS, and went on to become product marketer at Google.</p>
inside
January 1, 2012, 9:58am
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<p>I can read it if you’d like. I’m a stickler for grammar and style so hopefully I can be of use.</p>
<p>Actually, since all I needed was an evaluation, I think I’ve gotten enough feedback.</p>
<p>Thanks for the offer though!</p>
Rush10
January 1, 2012, 1:10pm
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<p>Do you still want me to read through them all? I got your PMs but haven’t had a chance to read through them in depth.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind. I just didn’t want to send more PMs lol</p>