Grade my essay, and I'll tell you the real score!

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<p>Really? Orwell’s novel made these problems worse? I highly doubt that.</p>

<p>Your essay could likely fool a grader into giving you a 4 or 5 even though it merits no more an a 3. Your examples do not support your thesis. Plus, you misuse so many big words that I was seriously confused several times while reading. </p>

<p>Work more on developing an argument than on putting in big words.</p>