<p>Prompt Sometimes it is necessary to challenge what people in authority claim to be true......</p>
<p>It is true that questioning old ideas and value can help bring about a change. Whether it is for the good or the bad depends on the intentions. In 1857 in the Indian subcontient a war broke out called the war of Idependce. It started with the Indians' questioning unfair practices of their British rulers ranging from high taxes to religious insensitivity. However as they began to question the ideas of people in authority it created a domino effect which in the end allowed them to have a self governing state after just 90 years, here questioning authority brought about a revolution for democracy.
However challenging authorities itself is not alone a cause for Good. As we learnt in the Lord of the flies where even though 'Piggy' managed to create a form of government it was overthrown by Jack who simply wanted to head the clan, which in the end resulted in 'Piggy' being murdered and the island burnt. In this sceneraio questioning authority lead to anarchy. A more recent example of questioning authority is about the Egyptian revoltion. Only after challenge the ironclad rule of Honsi Mubarak did Eypt become a democratic country.
Hence challenging authority can be an important step for good however if it was challenge as a matter of greed it could head to anarchy.</p>
<p>I like your essay in its brevity and clarity; however, I don’t know others will view it. You should have three different examples which are developed insightfully in three different paragraphs. Looking at the norm of the essays, you’re essay is very short.</p>
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<p>Thank you for your reply when i wrote it it didnt seem short however when i typed my writing i noticed how little i had originality written but i wanted to know how much i would have gotten anyways</p>
<p>Prompt:
Sometimes it is necessary to challenge what people in authority claim to be true. Although some respect for authority is, no doubt, necessary in order for any group or organization to function, questioning the people in charge-even if they are experts or leaders in their fields-makes us better thinkers. It forces all concerned to defend old ideas and decisions and to consider new ones. Sometimes it can even correct old errors in thought and put an end to wrong actions.</p>
<p>Assignment: Is it important to question the ideas and decisions of people in positions of authority? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.</p>
<p>I think your firs example is really nice, the second and third ones are fine, but u can make them better by being more specific and detailed. Also, there is a scope of improvement in the final para.
Other than that, u might wanna use some verbose. I know that it ain’t required, but would make ur essay sound better overall.
I’d probably give ur essay a 9 or a 10.
Best Of Luck</p>
<p>great examples! But I agree with others: u need better organization. also, try ending with a quote to show how polished and though provoking u can be in just 25 mins.</p>
just realized it always thought his name was spelt Honsi silly me</p>