<p>Hello! here is my SAT essay that i just wrote, can you give me a grade 0-12? thanks! and advice would help a lot!</p>
<p>Is the world changing for the better?</p>
<p>The Atom-Bomb was dropped, and within a few minutes, millions of people disintegrated into thin-air. The world is going into a downward spiral because of technological innovations that put aside the safety of people. Several examples from historical and current events clearly demonstrate that greed always prevails.</p>
<p>As demonstrated by the company Benyol inc, big companies are starting to care only about profits, and do not care about pollution. Benyol is a well known company in Australia for its paint. Every year, there have been reports of toxins from the company going into reservoirs, lakes, and wetlands. These toxins killed nearly all living organisms, as fish were floating on top of the waters. These pollutions also hugely affected humans, as people ate the fish, and the toxins were entering into the tap water. Thus, the world is degrading because of companies failing to care for the others health.</p>
<p>Yet, another example is the Atom-Bomb which countries used it for mass-destruction. As the world is evolving, so is machine weaponry. In 1956, America dropped the Atom Bomb onto Hiroshima in Japan. The generals did not care for the innocent lives in Japan, and only cared for defending its own nation. As a result, millions of people died, including young children, elders aged hundreds of years old, and animals that had no part in the war. The United States used newly acquired weapon and did not rationalize or think about how much suffering the bomb would cause. Hence, the improvement of technology also means the improvement of weapons of mass destruction, where people use it for harm.</p>
<p>As demonstrated by companies which produced DEET, big companies are not checking for the safety of their products which end up killing thousands of people. DEET was first used in the Vietnam was to paralyze and kill the enemy. Companies noticed that there was a huge infestation of mosquitoes, and they saw this as a chance for huge profits. Because the World War II was long over, they went and look all the barrels of DEET, and noticed it killed bugs. They did not test it on anything else because there was no time for it as the longer it took, the more profit was lost. They started to spray it everywhere on the street, as children played in the mist. The bug died, but before a week, the hospitals were filled with dying children, and thousands of dead birds were all over the streets. Therefore, companies are producing products which are untested, and deet is even used currently in many products.</p>
<p>After careful analysis of Benyol Inc, the Atom-Bomb, and DEET the world is indeed changing negatively because of technological advances. Many companies, and countries are innovating new products and weapons that threaten and cause harm to the world. This makes people question whether or not they are safe because as time increases, so do chemicals, and weapons of mass destruction which can be dangerous in the hands of the wrong person.</p>
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