Hapless student seeking talented essay readers

Hi, I am applying early to Harvard next year, and was wondering if someone would be kind enough to review my common app essay. I’m afraid I may have overread it (if that’s a thing) and now have no idea if it’s good or bad.

Fresh eyes please? Any help would be much appreciated.

lurks around, waiting for a possible English major :stuck_out_tongue:

I"m happy to read it…I’m blunt but kind. Send it on.

I’ll read it. I’m going to Vanderbilt so you can decide for yourself if that’s prestigious enough haha

If you still need more eyes, I’m happy to help. :slight_smile:

I’ll read it. I’m not necessarily kind, but, if you think you are Harvard material, your essay should not be bad enough to make me wrathful.

Thank you everyone for being so nice! The fact that so many people are willing to devote time to reading a hapless student’s essay makes me grateful for the supportive community here at CC :slight_smile:

@XCjunior2016 R u kidding me? Vanderbilt is TOP TIER, and anybody who says otherwise is probably just kidding :stuck_out_tongue:

If you’re still looking, I’d like to help!

I would like to read if you still want!

Incoming student at MIT, I can help!