<p>need help with my transfer essay. will swap, but im looking for legit advice and criticism. harsh criticism encouraged.</p>
<p>i am done with my apps. will be happy to help</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>I'll be glad to help if you want to swap, I also have a transfer essay.</p>
<p>I would be willing if you can email it as a Microsoft Word document. PM and I'll give you my email address.</p>
<p>While I appreciate the offer for reciprocity, I don't really have an essay I want comments on right now.</p>
<p>PM me, please. I'll be blunt.</p>
<p>PM please. I'll give it a look.</p>
<p>thanks so much for all your help. anyone else?</p>
<p>pm me and I can take a look</p>