<p>I am almost done with my essay, I just want someone to glance over it and give me some criticism.</p>
<p>Hey, Please send me the essay and ill look over it. Im also transferring and would love for you to critique edit proofread mine in return. I hope your not trying to get into the same school as me.</p>
<p>I’ll be willing to look over your essay if you wish.</p>
<p>Thanks, I just sent you it.</p>