Decision: Accepted
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1490 (750 R/W, 740 M, 23 Essay)
ACT (breakdown): N/A
SAT II: 790 US History, 780 Biology E
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.82
Weighted GPA: 4.11
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
AP (place score in parenthesis): Calculus AB (5), English Language (5), Biology (4), US History (5)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Calculus BC, AP US Government, Honors Physics, Honors English, Honors Theater, Spanish 4, Chorus, Orchestra, Advanced Research Laboratory Science
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar With Honors, Peddie Excellence in Theater, Wight Foundation Scholar, C.V. Starr Scholarship Award
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Multicultural Alliance (President), Young Democrats (President), Comedy Improvisation (President), Drama Club (Vice-President), Discipline Committee (Elected), Residential Advisor and Prefect, Senior Writing Fellow for Writing Center (Selected by faculty), Advanced Research Science (Selected By faculty) Chorus (Choir champion, student conductor, bass section leader), Orchestra, Better Beginnings Day Care
11 Theater Productions, including
Godspell (ensemble)
9 to 5 (ensemble)
Heidi Chronicles (Mark)
Romeo and Juliet (Lead, Friar Lawrence)
Hairspray (Ensemble)
Lend Me a Tenor (Lead, Henry Saunders)
Reckless (2nd, 4th, 5th Doctor)
Drowsy Chaperone (Star Lead, Man in Chair)
Rimers of Eldritch (Lead, Skelly Manor)
Government Inspector (Star Lead, Government Anton Antonovich)
Les Mis (Star Lead, Javert)
4 choir ensembles
4 orchestral ensembles
Student Conductor
Job/Work Experience: Summer intern in the laboratory of Dr. Kelly Jordan-Sciutto at UPenn
Volunteer/Community service: New Hope Baptist Church Food Bank, Christian Church of God Food Bank, Community Food Bank, Better Beginnings Day Care program, English as a Second Language
Summer Activities: Summer institute at Cushing Academy, Summer institute at Newark Academy, Student Diplomacy Corps (Mexico, Mayan immersion)
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App, (9, discussed growing up having to go to the food bank, balancing boarding school life with disparate life at home).
Supplement (10, discussed being agnostic in a southern Baptist family, growing an understanding of the cultural/political significance of god across nations)
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
-US History Teacher (10, my favorite teacher EVER, A all three terms, coworker as residential advisor)
-AP English Language Teacher (9, not my favorite teacher, but I received an A+ in his class)
-Theater Director, Instructor (10, directed me in over 6 shows, mentor. Gave me A+ in multiple classes)
-Harvard alumna (10, mentor since the 7th grade, recommended I apply to Harvard years before)
-Counselor Rec (rating 1-10, details): 10
-Interview (if any) (rating 1-10, details): 10, commended me for being one of the best interviewees he’s ever had, taken with my focus and intellect in many different areas.
Other:
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Social Studies/Government
State (if domestic applicant): New Jersey
Country (if international applicant): N/A
School Type: Private Boarding
Ethnicity: African American/Ghanaian
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: 40k-60k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM, low income
Reflections:
Strengths: Grades, EC’s, intended major, recs
Weaknesses: SAT scores
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Excellent Application Essays, Excellent Recs, URM
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Did not apply elsewhere
General Comments (if any):
AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH I CANNOT BELIEVE I WAS ACCEPTED. Opening my letter was one of the happiest moments in my life. I will never forget my mother’s joy when I called to give her the news. Harvard was a distant dream for me; I’d only ever known one person who went to Harvard, and that person always seemed so much more intelligent and poised than I ever thought I was. I always looked to Harvard as “that” school, the one only discussed in legend, and a figment of the general imagination. When I finally visited, I knew I needed to be apart of Harvard’s magnificent legacy, and knowing that this dream is finally coming true is UNREAL.
To all those deferred/rejected, do not lose heart. I am in no place to say because of my circumstances, but your day will come just as mine has. You will find success if you choose to keep working as hard as you already have. I’m sure you would not have filled out the application if you did not think you were good enough.