Harvard Supplement Essay - any feedbacks?

<p>Can anyone please give me some feedbacks for my Harvard supplement essay?</p>

<p>Let me know and I'll send an email to you. or PM</p>

<p>I really need someone who will get "back" to me, rather than just reading my essay then go "this essay is terrible" and decides to not to respond.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>between putting finishing touches to my oberlin essays and completing my other apps, i'll try my best to read yours and get back to u..</p>

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>Please feel free to send me a PM and I will provide you with some constructive critisism (I might take up to 24 hours, however). I hope to hear from you.</p>

<p>Kinda fed up with people who don't respond after you send them your essay myself, so if you want to send it to me to read, I'll definitely give you some feedback.</p>

<p>sure ive already turned in my apps</p>

<p>If you need additional help, you can PM it to me. But, it would be much more convinient for me to use "track changes" tool in microsoft word if you have it in doc. file and send it to my e-mail.
BTW, your sn ,, pretty interesting (;</p>

<p>I am done with apps so you can send it to me...I'll give you feedback!</p>

<p>i''ll read too</p>