Don’t second guess yourself now. Your essays are already in the hands of the ad coms. Take a deep breath and try to focus on other parts of your life. There is nothing you can do about your essays now.
My daughter second guessed her supplemental essay (after she was accepted!) She went back and reread it and laughed. I read it and could definitely see that her personality shined through. Trust the process. What is meant to be will be. Best wishes to you!
I’m not a reader on these boards. But I will be happy to read it and find five things that are good about it. You do need to move on but maybe some positive feedback will help.
Don’t worry so much about college applications! It’s only a small portion of your life. No matter what school you go to, I’m sure you’ll enjoy it there.