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<p>Do we value only what we struggle for? Plan your response, and then write an essay to explain your views on this issue. Be sure to support your position with specific points and examples. (You may use personal examples or examples from your reading, observations, or, knowledge of subjects such as history, literature, science.)</p>

<p>Value is defined as what a object or person inflicts upon the body. For struggle is a mere resultant of determination and distance it is sighted often struggle bears frit to value. Value is not always a direct aftermath of struggle though struggle often bears some value. This is shown by The American Revolution, where many years of a struggled conflict, brought forth the unification of a divided nation; in Mary Shelly's "Frankenstein" where Dr. Frankenstein envelops himself in a longsome struggle for the objective of reanimation which creates his valued monster which he eventually detests and George Orwell's "Animal Farm" which shows the struggle of the animals in the construction of their valued windmill and how it bears no value to other observers.</p>

<p>The American Revolution is a microcosm of the much greater value it initiated within America. Through a struggle of many men and men lost bore the great value of equality and justice. The American Revolution expresses how the value of humanity was initiated by the original struggle of humanity. This is a mere example of how struggle has given birth to value.</p>

<p>In juxtaposition to the value initiated by the struggle of the American Civil ar, we see in Mary Shelly's "Frankenstein" how Dr. Frankenstein struggles within his objective of reanimation yet in succeeding he loses all value for his creation and rather initiates the complete opposite attitude towards his creation- animosity. This is an example of how not always does struggle bear value, for sometimes the struggle is unprecedented and towards the wrong cause.</p>

<p>Finally we see the contrast in value from different characters for in George Orwell's "Animal Farm" we see the dire struggles of the animals in the construction of the Windmill leads to its ultimate destruction by Mr. Pilkington, the animals' neighbour. This shows how the struggles of the animals bears value to them though not to others which are unassociated with the group. This expresses how value from struggle is dependent upon viewpoint.</p>

<p>To conclude, struggle often leads to the rise of value but not always and sometimes the value is not appreciated from every perspective shown by The American Revolution, Mary Shelly's "Frankenstein" and George Orwell's "Animal Farm". Struggle is a definition of effort towards a sole objective and often it is this objective which becomes of value.</p>

<p>Hmmmmm? Some syntax and grammar problems. But the biggest problem is that it’s wishy washy. Take a stand. Use concise language and real life examples. GL</p>