<p>I want someone to give feedback and comments on my why essay for a college. Anyone interested in it? Thank you very much.</p>
<p>any one wants to read it?????? Just post!!!!!</p>
<p>My D's english teacher helped her with edits etc. You might try someone like that.</p>
<p>Thank you for your advice, txokmom. However, I am an Internaitonal student, so my English teacher is not that experienced. >_<</p>
<p>Send it to me. I'll take a look.</p>
<p>pm me if you are still looking for help.</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>Ditto. I wrote several when I was still writing them and I might be able to help!</p>
<p>pm meeeeeeeee!!!!;)</p>
<p>i don't mind either =]</p>
<p>pm me.
I'm not dangerous, I'm applying for Munich :-)</p>
<p>pm me :)</p>
<p>10char</p>