<p>Editor to the rescue! I really really would be blessed if anyone with brilliant editing skills could help me out here. I think i wrote a fine essay with lots of errors however. I am talking....</p>
<p>-sentence fluency
-transitions
-word choice
-flat out dumb errors!</p>
<p>I will PM ya if you are willing to.</p>
<p>bump(10char)</p>
<p>im willing.</p>
<p>I'm features editor of my newspaper, I'd be willing to help. Drop me a PM. </p>
<p>PS I am stickler for grammar, especially concerning apostrophes, so be warned! :) Hahah just kidding.</p>
<p>I can edit it if you still want advice (I'm assistant editor of my news magazine if that helps) :-D</p>
<p>send it over and ill edit it</p>
<p>"-sentence fluency
-transitions
-word choice"</p>
<p>In my book, you're asking for a ghostwriter, not an editor.</p>
<p>I'm a major grammar freak/find editing very fun. :) pm me if you still want help.</p>