Help, I need an honest 3rd party opinion about my essay

<p>I have been a lurker around here for a while but I finally registered as I am in need of some help. I wrote what I feel to be an amazing additional information essay for the common app, but the problem is it's really long and I am getting different feedback. So far all my close friends have told me how great it was but I have the feeling they are just being nice. I would really appreciate if someone could take a look, PM me.
Thanks</p>

<p>send it over.. ill be honest and quick i was asking for the same thing yesterday so i know where youre coming from</p>

<p>dittoooooo</p>

<p>i'll help too (PM me)</p>

<p>go right ahead!</p>

<p>please email me as well!</p>

<p>whats PMing ?</p>

<p><a href="mailto:ijuschillin@hotmail.com">ijuschillin@hotmail.com</a>
<a href="mailto:mmaheswaran@gssm.k12.sc.us">mmaheswaran@gssm.k12.sc.us</a></p>

<p>A PM is a private message. Basically inter forum e-mail. Click the username and select send a priate message.</p>