Help me get into my top choices :)

College Essays
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<p>I've gone ahead and typed up a rough draft of the essay I'll likely be submitting on the Common Application. While I have gotten some feedback from people at my school, I would highly appreciate some more feedback from fellow CC'ers.</p>

<p>If you wouldn't mind helping out a senior is distress, please PM me. Thanks!</p>

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<p>PM me it. :)</p>

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<p>I’ve made a lot of changes to the essay some of you have kindly taken the time to edit. Consequently, would a few more people mind helping me edit what is hopefully my final rough draft?</p>