Rough Rough essay

<p>Would anyone like me to PM them my essay? It's still a very early draft, I just wants some input as to where I should go next with it. Please and thank you. :-)</p>

<p>u may pm-me, i will critique it :)</p>

<p>anybody else want to take a gander?</p>

<p>I would love to, jusgimmethegun...</p>

<p>okay but i might not get back to you asap</p>

<p>I don't want to seem like I'm begging, it's just... I'm bored, and it's friday night. So you guys reading/critiquing my essay brings some excitement : ) So then, any other takers?</p>

<p>gimi it i'll read</p>

<p>ill read it!</p>

<p>^^ I'll give it a shot, if you'd like.</p>

<p>Thanks to everyone who read so far. Any other takers?</p>

<p>BTW this is for the common app personal statement.</p>

<p>I'll read it if you'd like...</p>

<p>Just give me the (essay). :D</p>

<p>This essay is a breathing beast. I'm flying through drafts right now, if anyone wants to help me fix the kinks.</p>

<p>i'll look at it</p>

<p>I'll read it!</p>