<p>I've just written a college admissions essay about my journey through different languages, but it still needs a lot of work, including being cut down by at least 100 words. Can anyone read it and give me some advice?</p>
<p>anyone at all? i just need someone to read over it and give me their thoughts.</p>
<p>oh, come on. someone has to have some time on their hands. i'll read and critique someone else's essay if they do the same for me.</p>
<p>Sure, I'll take a look. PM me.</p>
<p>I'd be glad to...PM me.</p>
<p>Send it over, I'll help you out.</p>