Help proofread my UT essay topic C

<p>The deadline is approaching and I am finishing up my essays. This might be my final draft after 3 rough draft. If anyone is willing to help me proofread and correct grammar ( or give some comments/advices), I will PM my essay to you. Thank you in advance! Happy Thanksgiving!</p>

<p>I can read.</p>

<p>sure…</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>