Read & Criticize my essays, please

<p>Hey guys....
I really need help on the essays.
There are three essays.
Two for UT and one for GT.
I hope you guys can read all of them.
I need someone who can criticize severely and hopefully will help me get my grammars right.
(Im bad at grammar)
If you can read it, will you PM me?
I will online for like 12 more hrs.
Do you think you can read my essays right away?
I really want to finish my essays by tomorrow.
So hopefully you can read it and send your comments after 1hr or so.
Thanks guys.</p>

<p>sure. i have an hour i thnk</p>

<p>send it over</p>

<p>Thanks guys. Thank you so much.
Hey, is there any more people who can comments or correct my grammar errors?
Thanks</p>

<p>PM me ....... I will get it back asap..........</p>