Help shortening my essay

<p>I recently finished my commonappp essay and it is about 700 words. I've tried to shorten it a little on my own, but obviously need another opinion in order to meet the 500 word limit. Please post here or send me a PM if you are be willing to help me out. Thanks</p>

<p>I’ll try to help</p>

<p>Try to read 3 more times, after you can understand how many lines are not good for this essay.</p>