<p>Alright, I really like my essay, but I've having trouble finding what to cut out... It's 986 words, and was hoping someone could help me by reading it and offering what they think should be cut. I'm looking for the 500~800 range, but if I can't make it below 850 I think that's fine as well.</p>
<p>Made it down to 950… :D</p>