<p>I just finished my "why business" essay. I'm going to use it for Georgetown and Michigan, and maybe a few other places. It's pretty rough but does anyone want to read/give suggestions? It needs to be good!</p>
<p>Thanks!!!</p>
<p>eh... bump?</p>
<p>I'm not a big business buff, but I can give it a look over if you'd like :)</p>
<p>I'll take a stab at it. PM me?</p>
<p>I'll look it over and try and give you some feedback. Just PM me.</p>
<p>I can take a look at your essay and express any suggestions or ideas I will have</p>