Help with 150-word essay? Please?

College Essays
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<p>I just wrote my 150 word essay... except that it came out at 205. I've managed to get it down to 174, but I think I need a little help getting it the rest of the way down.</p>

<p>Also, any other suggestions would be much appreciated. </p>

<p>(I also have my main essay for the common app written (at 520+ words) and would love it if someone wanted to look at that, too).</p>

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<p><strong><em>bump</em></strong></p>

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<p>i'd love to help you! PM me</p>

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<p>Okkies..I'm free this summer. You can PM me if you like :)</p>

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<p>PM me if you want another reader. :)</p>