Help With Admission Essays/Personal Statements

<p>I really need help editing and proffing my essays. My first deadline is December 1 for the University of Washington while the rest are later. Neither of my parents attended college or know what a good college essay looks like. I'm a first generation hopeful college student. I would really appreciate it if anyone could look at my essays and tell me what they think. I know the deadline's coming up really soon but I've never been able to finish things early. I plan to reuse my essays for other schools too.</p>

<p>What I need help with is:</p>

<p>Short Response (250-500 words)
Personal Statement - One long (500-650 words) and 5 short (100 words each)
Journal of Activities - 4 that are 100-200 words</p>

<p>Most except for the short personal statements apply to multiple schools. You don't have to help me with all of them, but any advice will help. I'll provide the prompt related to each too.</p>

<p>I will also return the service if anyone needs it. </p>

<p>Please help.</p>