Help with my essay on bad high school experience

<p>This is on the Common App Promt on "Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family."
A review from someone will be very appreciated.</p>

<p>I am a parent, happy to read and offer feedback.</p>

<p>Thank you very much!</p>

<p>Maybe I can help?</p>

<p>I’ll help.</p>

<p>@200Jamie you already looked at it</p>

<p>@jojo15 I’m good</p>