<p>Hello. English is not my native language and I believe I need a lot of tips/criticism for my essay as it is going to have a lot of flaws (Grammar, flow of ideas, sentence structure...etc). Would anyone please be willing to help? I would greatly appreciate it.</p>
<p>i will read it for you.</p>
<p>There are some great writing tips in this book that you can download for free at [How</a> to Write A Personal Statement | Dear Admissions](<a href=“DearAdmissions.com is for sale | HugeDomains”>HugeDomains.com), and if you check out the section on “Drafting” on page 50 you can read some pointers specifically on flow, as well as some common grammatical errors. Do your best to write a polished draft, and then you can come to CC to get some readers for your essay!</p>