here's a common app essay, just fer you

<p>I have a common app essay in need of tough criticism. It's pretty much finished up, and I just need a couple people to look at it and point out anything that really needs fixin. I wrote from the "issue of personal significance" prompt.</p>

<p>i would prefer non-'09 kids, but any help is appreciated.</p>

<p>im willing</p>