Hey I just met you, and this is crazy, here's my essay. Proofread maybe?

I’m applying to some somewhat selective colleges but I want my essays to be Ivy-League caliber. I decided to add in Oberlin College and Whitman last minute (2 weeks earlier) so I would also like a skilled set of eyes to please proofread my essays. You can be as ruthless as you want, call my essay absolute rubbish/pathetic etc as long as you have a reason! Please PM me! (Seniors not allowed!)

Nobody wants to read my essay :(( (bump)

Hey,I’ll read your essay:)
It’ll probably be nothing like the advice you’d get from professors and teachers,but I’m happy to assist.

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Did you…want my help?:slight_smile:

@TheCollegeGirl This was posted in early January. Most likely deadlines are past.

@usualhopeful
I see what you are saying! Thanks.
He/she could at least have explained.Xp
Oh,well. I tried to help:):slight_smile:

@usualhopeful
Btw,this is just a random question: what does it mean when people here text/post “bump”?

nice title op lol
ill read it

@usualhopeful - It means the OP hasn’t received as many responses as he/she was hoping for; by making a comment like “bump,” it will show up as a recent post.

@Love theBard - I can’t tell if you’re responding to me or @TheCollegeGirl, but the ‘bump’ comment was made on January 3rd.

@LoveTheBard
Thanks.:smiley: that cleared up a lot.