Anyone willing to read and critque my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi,
I'm apply to schools such as Berkeley, Columbia, BC, BU, GWU, etc. Is anyone willing to tell me if there are any grammatical errors and what they think of the essay? Thanks beforehand!</p>

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<p>sure, i'll read it</p>

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<p>heyy soph in college pm it over if u want - it may take me a couple of days to read it tho.</p>

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<p>shiva55,
I know you're in the class of '09... I don't see the point of lying.</p>

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<p>^Exactly. Here's an exact quote from shiva55 on 8-22-08:</p>

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<p>I rest my case.</p>

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<p>I'll read and critique your essay if you want the perspective of an adult college parent.</p>

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<p>I'm an '09er, but the only school from your list that I MIGHT be applying to is Columbia. If you want, you can send it and I'll read and respond to it.</p>

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<p>i am applying berkeley too. if u want, i can read urs.</p>

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<p>I'll be glad to help ya</p>

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<p>hey! 'd be happy to take a look and offer feedback.</p>

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<p>Thanks so far =).</p>

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<p>pm me.. i am very glad to help you...</p>