Hi there. Will anyone give me feedbacks about my essays?

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<p>I'm a newbie, forgive me for my unfamiliarity with CC. </p>

<p>I'm a PEA and PA applicant from Asia (not Korea, China, Japan, nor other over-represented minorities). Not from an international school.
English is definitely not my first language, although it's keeping up :D</p>

<p>It is too late to change my essays. From the start I know my chances are slim, so I guess I wont be too disappointed if rejected or waitlisted. Still....</p>

<p>But please give me some opinions for improvements in the future. Like what points should I strengthen, how can I stand out from the rest of the applicants from my essays, etc. </p>

<p>Geez, this sounds so formal.. Yuck.
Anyway, 1st post!!!</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM me. I will ask my cousin who’s an English major if she could be of any help.</p>

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<p>PM if you would like</p>

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<p>PM me if you want.
What grade are you applying for?</p>

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<p>You can PM me too.</p>

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<p>PM if you’d like, I’d be happy to look them over!</p>

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<p>Thanks guys!! Ill pm you at 6…if thats okay.</p>

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<p>Which time zone?</p>

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<p>bangtkok’s time zone lol :D</p>

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<p>what is PM?</p>

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<p>Private Message</p>

<p>SSRS (60 second Rule Sucks-started by yours truly)</p>

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<p>@ scholwannabe: it’s a private message, mate.</p>

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<p>PM me if you want</p>