<p>It's my Common App essay, first draft. I just want some thoughts and feedback, anything regarding how you think an admissions officer would see it as would be especially helpful. Ask for it and I'll PM it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it as well :)</p>
<p>sent to both of you. :D</p>
<p>I’ll read if you’d like.</p>
<p>PM me, I’ll read it</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I’ll surely read it!</p>
<p>Where are you applying? I’ll take a look :)</p>
<p>I will read it</p>
<p>Sent to all of you so far, still no feedback. I’ll be applying to schools such as Princeton, Yale, and a few sub-ivy tier schools.</p>
<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you still need help.</p>
<p>ill read if you like</p>
<p>Send it my way</p>
<p>Feel free to PM it to me if you’d like. (I’m transferring to Brown this fall, if that means anything.)</p>
<p>so… I’ve sent it to everyone so far and only one person gave me feedback…</p>
<p>btw, congrats, akunamatatta. I really want to get into these top-tier schools but my stats are definitely on the low end for these colleges (2100,3.7 UW, 15/250), statistically speaking. I think the essay will really be what I need to make it through but I’ve been hearing from people outside of CC that it’s a good topic and it interests the reader at first but then the essay itself is just sub-par. >_<</p>
<p>I’ll read it and try to give you feedback.</p>
<p>I’ll give you some constructive feedback.</p>
<p>I’ll read. I give constructive criticism.</p>