Horrible essay writer. Need help desperately.

<p>I am not like most of the student body on here. I know you all excel in everything you do, so it would be a pleasure for some of you to review what I have so far for my transfer essay. I need some help with organization, implementing new ideas, grammar, and just general feedback. If you're interested in helping me let me know and I will PM you what I have so far. I am not looking for anyone to write an essay for me, just for some assistance in the writing process.</p>

<p>Sure. PM me</p>

<p>Sent. It’s a very rough sketch. Far from the final product.</p>

<p>Just to give everyone a general idea of what my essay is about this is my introduction… “Dream bigger buddy.” My Uncle remarked at the dinner table. These three words would change my destiny forever.</p>

<p>I’ll take a read</p>

<p>PM sent thanks for your interest.</p>

<p>I’ll bite</p>

<p>-------------------------------------------If it is to be, it is up to me…</p>

<p>PM has been Sent.</p>