How I spent my summer - A Princeton Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I've been working on my Princeton essays for a while now. I am aware of how slim my chances are, but I think I have what it takes to construct an amazing set of essays; I'm not afraid to take any risks at all - I just need to keep the adcoms engrossed in my application.</p>

<p>I've got three essays I would like critique on, two of which still need heavy revision:</p>

<p>I have my flagship essay which briefly describes my battle with starvation and the resulting values I attained - this one is pretty solid by now - but critique is still appreciated</p>

<p>I have my summer experience essay which details my distaste for people who work for grades rather than an enriching education - it also details my individuality and the minor fact that I'm one of the world's best DDR players! ^^</p>

<p>And I have an essay elaborating an EC, or some other commitment. I chose my decision to dual enroll at a university during 10th - 12th grades due to the lack of courses available at my high school. </p>

<p>Anyways, please anyone who has the time to offer me a hand, or just is willing to rate my essays, please just tell me and I'll send 'em over.</p>

<p>Thanks for reading!</p>

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<p>I would love to read the first two essays, they sound extremely interesting.</p>

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<p>I'll take on all three if you want, it might take a day or two to get through all of them, but I've got the time!</p>

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<p>I've read several Yale essays and helped folks, but Princeton seems to be similar in many respects, so I'd be willing to help you! Your summer essay sounds sorta cliche, but I can get more from the actual reading.</p>

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<p>I would love to help... just pm</p>

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<p>i'm interested in all three of them! pm me or email them to <a href="mailto:angelmonicaw@yahoo.com">angelmonicaw@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>If u send me a PM I'll have a look :)</p>

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<p>I could read the first two if you need help with those. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll critique them - PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll read them-PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll give some feedback for all 3.</p>

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<p>i will read all 3 and critique them, just PM me....i will try my best</p>

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<p>lol email me : <a href="mailto:narcissa09@gmail.com">narcissa09@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Anyone else interested?</p>

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<p>Sure. I'll be glad to read your essays.</p>

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<p>i'll try to help you out, send them over</p>