How is my topic for this essay/ Have I formulated a good structure?

hello everyone, I’m writing my essay on my growth over Highschool while struggling with Tourette Syndrome and the challenges it presents. I do not focus too much on the actual disability/how hard it was to live with it. I focus primarily on the growth from being unsure of myself to becoming a confident person moving forward.

If you would like to read my essay over, i would gladly appreciate it!

id love to read it!

Awesome I’ll send it over now

Bump

Bump

Sorry-- school started today and I’m swamped.

But I’m not sure those “Bumps” really accomplish much.

I’m sorry, I just needed help haha, thanks though

Still need some help to read!

OK, it’s a weekend. Why not PM it to me and I’ll take a look?