How to practice Improving Paragraphs/Sentences? (most subjective?)

<p>I got a 710 on my writing section, and the only thing holding me back are the Improving Paragraphs. All 6 of my errors were from them.</p>

<p>Silverturtle's guide didn't really go into it...but is it just practice practice practice?</p>

<p>PS. do essay readers read your essay online? Because I saw my photocopy and it looked horrendous in cursive (But I got a 11)</p>

<p>bump 10 char</p>

<p>From what I understand they do read the scanned copy.</p>