How's my essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I just wrote my essay for the Macaulay CUNY Honors application, nut the topic is the "significant risk or ethical dilemma" one that's on the Common Application as well.</p>

<p>(I don't really know how to send the document on here since i haven't really gone on here in a while...anyone want to tell me how and then I can send it to whoever is nice enough to read it?)</p>

<p>I'm honestly going nuts about this essay. I never realized how bad of a writer I am. I've always done pretty well on writing in high school (I just graduated) and I did okay on the SAT's essay- a 10. </p>

<p>Anyway... please read my essay!!! Let me know if it's dumb or childish or if it answers the question. Thanks!</p>

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<p>please reply cuz i need this done before the end of the week! Thanks!</p>

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<p>pm me …</p>

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<p>PM me too. I’ll read and give comments</p>

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<p>pm meee i will read it :)</p>

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<p>I can read for you and critique, PM it over! :)</p>

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<p>I will gladly read it if you pm me!</p>

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