DS is an incredibly intelligent, very funny kid. He’s kind of the class clown, and that’s a big part of his personality. He’s thinking of using that sense of humor in his common app essay, to describe a rather specific rite of passage that is a big part of our family culture. Do you think this is a good idea, or will he come across as snarky and not serious?
It really depends. Like HYPS like risks and chances in essays but second tier (Northeastern, tufts, GTown) are much more grounded in what they like to see.
IMO it is fine to inject some humor into the essay but the humor should not overshadow the underlying story he wants to tell. The essay is supposed to let his personality shine through. However, I would just have some trusted people (ex. English teacher) read it over not just for grammar but for overall tone.
It’s supposed to be “your voice”, whatever that voice is. So if sounds like him, then I think he’s done a good job.
I don’t think humor is a problem at all if that’s how he looks at the world. (we need more people like that IMO.)
Wow, I couldn’t disagree more. This is totally baseless.
To the OP: Humorous essays can be great, but they’re hard to pull off and many attempts fall brutally flat (which is partly why they are so good when they do work!).
I’d say have him write it, and have several people read it. If it is universally acclaimed, then great. If it isn’t, then don’t risk it. Humor REALLY needs to work, and sometimes it can just miss the mark.
Go for the humor, but have somebody proofread it that doesn’t know him, so you can get a sense of how his humor comes across without the “I know this kid he’s funny” factor.
The risks the tippy tops like are those that grow kids. And double that when it comes to the app and supps, where you present yourself. OP said “class clown,” not that he’s a subtle, effective wit, or mature enough to know the difference.
And this is about admissions, not entertaining. Wit is good, but the overall needs to be relevant to the review. These essays aren’t graded like hs papers. You aren’t writing for the English teacher, who knows you and may forgive some silliness. They’re going to adcoms who will determine your admit status.
It’s not just “your voice.”
We attended a 4 College presentation last week (ND, UVA, JHU and Emory) and someone asked what they are looking for in an applicant. They said… authenticity. Be yourself and have it show through on your essays. That said, the advice above is good. Not, over the top or offensive.