<p>Basically, I'd like some imput if anyone is willing to spend the time. You don't really have to read anymore of this post...just explanations. </p>
<p>Ok, so this is probably the wrong time to be freaking out. I'm applying to BC (first choice) Early Action, and I did it through Common App. So, I figured I'd just send that part of the application to all the schools I wanted to apply to, even though the deadline wasn't until Jan. 1. (These being Princeton, Cornell, Syracuse and Goucher.) I didn't have a teacher or guidance councelor read over my essays, only my parents (and they don't know about college admissions), so really, I was just going on the idea that colleges want to hear about something that changed you. </p>
<p>SO. I wrote my essay, applied to those schools above, and now I'm thinking that I focused on the wrong thing in my essay. I still have two more collleges to apply to that werent' on common app., so can someone please read over my essay? I would really appreciate it.</p>